Hi there blogger, today I am back with a other blog post. Today my blog post is going to be about my very own Traditional Tale that I did on Tuesday for our long write. We have been doing Traditional Tales for the last few weeks and it's really cool. But sadly next week we will be going onto a different thing for our writing but I am not sure what. I will let you all known when we find out next week in my Wednesday blog post. My one is only half of it so that later on I can show you the rest of it it is about a little boy how gets a dog and there is a bully at all. Hope you enjoyed my blog post. I would love some feedback for plase. Have a great day and see you all next time bye.
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When he woke up he jumped ride out of his bed and ran down the stairs to his mother and pop room. Once he was in the room he jumped up onto the bed and started jumping around saying it’s my birthday momma and papa woke and said “let's go and unwrap your parents” said Pompa
Once mother and dad got out the grifts James started with the little ones and then would start to go bigger and bigger until there were no more grifts left. Lot of him were things like homemade toy trucks for him to play with when it was raining outside. Then when he got to the bigger grifts there were two that sanded out to him one box with holes in it and then there was another one which was a lot bigger and that made James want to open it. He started to open it and then sure that it was the best gift he had ever gotten, it was red with black spots on it which made it look even cooler. It was a snowy side which he had wanted ever since it had started to snow which has been for the last couple of weeks.
Then he looked over at the one that had holes in it and hoit to himself “ way do have holes in it, it must be because there is something in it?” James Said to himself out loud. Then when he went to open it and just before he could take off the box like his older brother Max came down and said “Hey why did you not come and wake me up!! Said Max in a mad tone. Mother then said “because we did not wake and we said to you last night if you want to see your little brother open his grifts then you were going to have to make the effort to get out of your bed,” said Mother. Once James order brother Max that gone back bed it was time to open the box with a lot of holes in it.
When he opened it there was a dog inside the box a little dog a little pup. It was a boxer and he looked so cute. Then Father said “ when we got the little dog off the farmer he said that the dog's name was Butt,” said father. Then James started to laugh and the dog jumped on him and started licking his face. To James, this was the best birthday of his life and not just birthday this was the best day of his life, he was so happy the first thing he did was take his dog for a walk.
When they were walking down the road then a few older boys that went to James school were there. THey liked to bully all of the other kids because the boys were big and all of the other kids at the school were really small.
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