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Monday, November 27, 2017

Liam's A&P show

 this is my side show for wen my class went to the A&P show it was really cool  we went on rids and got lots of food it was my first time going to the canterbursy A&P show and the first time that I had tried candy floss and it was really nice hope you injoy my side her is a ohoine of the self hat we hat to do  

Tuesday, November 7, 2017

The ocean maker

her is my test hat I did for the end of year her is a link for the video hope you enjoy my story
can I have some feedback place so I how what I need to work on.
when I stated just got on to my plan we had 10mins to do our plans  
https://www.YouTube.com/watch?v=J2J4eareIIg

Name Liam Williamson                                                                      Peer Marker: Blake Ross
Success Criteria - Narrative
Features of Text
Student
Peer
  • I have included a beginning, middle and an end.


  • I have created a setting by showing with my words or using who, what, when & where.


  • I have included a problem & solved it (or created good tension)


  • I have written a satisfying ending.


  • I have written in either 1st person or 3rd person.


  • I have used descriptive language throughout  (sets of 3, alliteration, similes, personification, metaphors) and provided detail to my story.


  • I have used a range sequencing connectives. (time words or phrases)


My Personal Target/s:



What I think I did well:
What my partner thinks I’ve done well:
What I think I need to improve next time:
What my partner thinks I need to improve next time:




It was a Never really hot day with no water in the desert with a lots of sunken boats can win the Disaster happened I was fining around in my airplane I'm trying to find maybe just a little cycloid it might have a little bit of rain. I got out my I started looking around for a crowd. But then I sure a lighthouse as I went around a Melton and it’s light was at a closed hat was 20KM away so I went to the lighthouse to see Is there any survivors and If they have ENE water at all when I got to the lighthouse her was a girl how had so much water and food hat wood at last Lat her a month so after I had Climbed the stairs she said that she had a rain maker so we could Make more rain come down. So we got into my plane went to the plane and we went to the cloud her was a rainstorm going on so went to the core of the storm and we put the Rainmaker in her and then all of the sea was back sunken ships in my back on the sea and it was amazing site to see

     THE END!!!

Friday, October 20, 2017

ura manuka logo

hello this is my side work plase give my seem feedback

Thursday, September 28, 2017

maths DLO 28/9/17


my maths group had to do a DLO to show want we had learn about fractions. her is the link hope you enjoy it by
Liam
yaldhurst school.  https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1rBL4yblhmpSV8yUW5qYmRNME0/view

Monday, September 25, 2017

NZ frist

For the last 2 weeks we have been doing elections we are NZ first and we hope to win the school elections. Her is side of what we have been up to for the last 2 weeks hope you enjoy the side.  

Tuesday, September 5, 2017

TORUK the first fight


On saturday night me and my step nan went to TORUK the first fight it was Amazing because it was full of acrobatic dance moves which was amazing. Here is some Photos from when I was there with my step nan. It was a great experience with the first time I've ever been to something like this it was amazing I recommend you go to this hope you enjoyed my blog post. IMG_0744.JPG.jpeg IMG_0749.JPG.jpegIMG_4173.JPG

Wednesday, August 16, 2017

Casper - not a friendly ghost.

Hi met Casper. Casper is my new cousin. He is coming up to 4 months now and is very cute and cuddly, but only because he is in his panda 🐼 suit. He loves hugs like me of course. He loves to be touched but not in the face. Here is a photo of Casper in his panda 🐼 suit