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Wednesday, September 26, 2018

weird things in the forest side

Hi there you know how I did that post-test last time well I that do go and make it into something else something creative so I went and did a side and added in some photos and I think that I have done a good job on this tell me what you think there it is by now.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Liam,

    What a great way to publish your story. I really like how you developed your story and tried to keep the readers interest through your use of interesting yet relevant detail. It is great that the pictures you chose support what is happening in your story. Remember when you write your blog post, that it should have punctuation as well. You have written one very loooooong sentence. I'm excited to see what you blog about next.

    Mrs Taylor :)

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    1. I mrs Taylor thank for for taking the time to go and write a comment. Thank you for putting in where I have made some misacks. I have tired my best on this story and I am happy that you like it so far. I am as well looking forwood to what I can do on my blog next time bye.

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