The ocean maker

her is my test hat I did for the end of year her is a link for the video hope you enjoy my story
can I have some feedback place so I how what I need to work on.
when I stated just got on to my plan we had 10mins to do our plans  
https://www.YouTube.com/watch?v=J2J4eareIIg

Name Liam Williamson                                                                      Peer Marker: Blake Ross

Success Criteria - Narrative
Features of Text	Student	Peer
I have included a beginning, middle and an end.
I have created a setting by showing with my words or using who, what, when & where.
I have included a problem & solved it (or created good tension)
I have written a satisfying ending.
I have written in either 1st person or 3rd person.
I have used descriptive language throughout  (sets of 3, alliteration, similes, personification, metaphors) and provided detail to my story.
I have used a range sequencing connectives. (time words or phrases)
My Personal Target/s:

What I think I did well: What my partner thinks I’ve done well: What I think I need to improve next time: What my partner thinks I need to improve next time:

It was a Never really hot day with no water in the desert with a lots of sunken boats can win the Disaster happened I was fining around in my airplane I'm trying to find maybe just a little cycloid it might have a little bit of rain. I got out my I started looking around for a crowd. But then I sure a lighthouse as I went around a Melton and it’s light was at a closed hat was 20KM away so I went to the lighthouse to see Is there any survivors and If they have ENE water at all when I got to the lighthouse her was a girl how had so much water and food hat wood at last Lat her a month so after I had Climbed the stairs she said that she had a rain maker so we could Make more rain come down. So we got into my plane went to the plane and we went to the cloud her was a rainstorm going on so went to the core of the storm and we put the Rainmaker in her and then all of the sea was back sunken ships in my back on the sea and it was amazing site to see

     THE END!!!

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maths DLO 28/9/17

my maths group had to do a DLO to show want we had learn about fractions. her is the link hope you enjoy it by
Liam
yaldhurst school.  https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1rBL4yblhmpSV8yUW5qYmRNME0/view

NZ frist

For the last 2 weeks we have been doing elections we are NZ first and we hope to win the school elections. Her is side of what we have been up to for the last 2 weeks hope you enjoy the side.  

TORUK the first fight

On saturday night me and my step nan went to TORUK the first fight it was Amazing because it was full of acrobatic dance moves which was amazing. Here is some Photos from when I was there with my step nan. It was a great experience with the first time I've ever been to something like this it was amazing I recommend you go to this hope you enjoyed my blog post.

Casper - not a friendly ghost.

Hi met Casper. Casper is my new cousin. He is coming up to 4 months now and is very cute and cuddly, but only because he is in his panda  suit. He loves hugs like me of course. He loves to be touched but not in the face. Here is a photo of Casper in his panda  suit. 

   

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football and hockey zones

today we want to football and hockey zones. It was lots of fun we had a year 5 6 hockey term a year 5 6 football term a year 7 8 hockey term and a year 7 8 football term. I play in the year 5 6 hockey term. all the terms plays 4 game and has one BYE the year 5 6 football term mand the sim-final and lost my term got lust but we played wull I soce a goal the year 7 8 foot ball term win a game the year 7 8 hockey term win no games and my term the year 5 6 hockey term win no games we played wull her is a phoio of us

friday sports 16/6/17

On friday we had friday sport and we win are 2ed game of the sean the soce was 4 5 her is a trrm phoro of us this is my lening blog for this week

last friday sport

on friday we had friday sport and we lost the game 4 5 was the soce. I was capen for the game and. I got to chose player of the day. her is a phoie

friday sports 2ed of june

last week at friday sport I got player of the day and got a certificate and we played really well we lost 4 0 was the score. her is a photo of us playing hockey on friday at honby hight school at friday sport
this is my lening blog for this week.

maths

Mark was her and we made a maths equation and her it is hope you in enjoy

The homeless dog

The homeless dog

 This is a story I am writing including ispace, similes and metaphors.  I will keep you updated on how it continues...

It was a could wander morning ever firing would be frosted and. Me a dog with not a very big cont would be freezing heaving to eat food from the gerbig and. it Would not taste good and

I would be running from the animal control and having to sleep in a box.

friday sports

on friday we had friday sports I played hockey we win 3 0

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cross country

On Monday we had cross country and I did my best and  I got 2nd in the yr6 race and on Tuesday I got a medal.
Here are some photos of me at cross country and I am going to zones in a few weeks

Exploring Blogs

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

Refleetion

wild eyes presentation

this term we have been doing some thing cool called wild eyes lots of schools around NZ. This is my wild eyes presentation hope you enjoyed.

reading work

last week I did some reading work and the week before to her is a photo of my work.

In the newspaper

First we meet famous NZ sprint car racer Jamie Duff, you may have read about it in a previous blog post. But then we went in the newspaper!!!

It was cool to meet Jamie Duff but to meet him and be in the newspaper also is cool! Here is a photo of the newspaper. You can't see me sadly.

camp Blog

2 Weeks ago my class  and I went on camp to living spring! we did archery, we went to the farm park to feed the animals. We did shooting and it was fun because we shoot of targets We her is a photo of Eben and Saxon. doing up their tet it was the yener 4 5 6's we had prits with as on camp and the year 4 teachers with
us this is my Learning Blog for this week

race

Today was Amazing! Me and my class meet Famous NZ sprint car racer Jamie Duff!

He had a Massive truck with them this is me Trying to bend titanium I don't think it's

Going to work and we got his autograph! I learnt a fut today you can bend titanium and

And the race car is superfast and the Engine is worth $75000

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Library rules

yesterday we had to make some Library rules it was me Saxon and Hunter enjoy

Don't cut into the line and Don’t run in the library, just read a book. Don't eat and drink in the library.  Do not yell in the library, do not throw or rip the books. Do not hurt people in the library. Do not swear punch and kick in the library. Do not pull the finger at people. Do not be mean to people about their reading. Do not read a book out loud. Do not stand on books.

Talk quietly  if not, be silent, also be silent if the teacher is talking. Always get a good book that you want to read. If you get a book that looks really good on the the cover but it isn't good in the inside (never judge a book by it’s cover) you can always get another one. Read your book in silence or a whisper. Walk to the library don't run there, then sit on the mat and listen to the teacher. After that grab a book and read it.

being a Office HERO

Me and my friend Rhys made a slide show about being a Office HERO enjoy.


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rain cycle

1. The hate on the water makes the water turn into water vapour.
2. It turns the water vapour into water droplets.

The water droplets makes clouds then it rains.

How to use your drive

This is how to use your drive

You hold down on the thing

you want to move to the folder 

Being a YMS HERO

We were exploring being a YMS HERO!

Isaac, Rhys and me were exploring being a Healthy 

individuals 

Swimming blog post

We went swimming this week because we are doing swimming lessons for 2 weeks.

To get better in swimming It was freezing on Wednesday. I love swimming It's one of my favourite sports. I felt like I was in an ice block in the pool I was standing up shivering in the water.  we are so lucky to have school pool.